Monday, 6 February 2017

A Review of Pius Oleghe's Sudden Storm

I read Pius Oleghe’s Sudden Storm (click here to read the poem) in my first year in Junior Secondary School. It was in my New Oxford Secondary English Course Book One. It became the first African poem I was exposed to. Our English Teacher – a glamorous lady then – had (because she was strict) directed us to learn the poem by heart if we got home. It was an assignment, so I treated it as such. Thus, at night, in the four-ceiling room of the boys quarter I shared with my elder brother (in JSS3) and my elder sister (in SS3), I memorized the poem entirely from ‘The wind howls, the trees sway’ to the last line: ‘Steadily pours the rain.’  My mother was not there to remind me to read, as she had done many years before when she was teaching me two letter words. She lived far away from where I and my siblings schooled; in our countryside several miles away. So I read that poem, because I feared if I did not memorize it, there would be punishment and embarrassment in class the next day.

And as I predicted, there was embarrassment for defaulters. Our Teacher had come into the class the next day and asked everybody to stand up. One could only sit down on the long bench – shared with a partner of opposite sex – if only the poem was recited correctly. Only three of us sat down – two girls and I – not because the teacher loved us more, but because we surpassed her expectations. I had never been so proud of myself. Well, that was many years ago; over a decade now. Yet, this poem – Sudden Storm – continues to live in my heart, watered by time.

I remember in my second year, while in a friend’s apartment, I forged a tune for the poem and sang it. Perhaps, this has given it strength to live beyond its lifetime in my memory, or maybe it was the simplicity of words which the poet merged to create an everlasting image in my memory. I can see the wind howling in a clean village setting; I can see the trees swaying as the wind rages, bending the Coconut trees, palm trees, pear, orange etc.

Mr Oleghe in this poem also talks about lowlife and poverty and what people who experience such face when the rain is approaching. The poem talks about houses with loosed top sheets, and how they clatter and clang, to herald the rain’s coming.  The open windows close with a bang, because of the mad wind. The sky changes into dark, as if it was night: the thick dark clouds stuff the sky like cotton wool, and shield the sun completely.

Mr Oleghe, in the next stanza, explains how the Rain’s coming affects the housekeeper; how she parks the household wares, be it clothes dried in the level field, buckets, brooms, plates, foodstuffs dried outside, etc. Although she does this with a thousand minor cares, she worries about the where about of her son who is so happy because the rain will soon come.

The streets clear of people who throng it because they do not want to be drenched. The houses are filled: even strangers seek refuge under your roof until the rain comes and goes. The noise gathers because happy children shout. This noise rivals the ranging wind. And all that can move (human beings and Animals) are still. There are heavy clouds; then from above, thunder strikes (which deafens) and then the rain falls at last.


Pius Oleghe was a Nigerian poet (from Owan tribe, in Edo state). He attended University of Ibadan, and together with Wole Soyinka and five others, they founded the Pirate Confraternity while studying at Ibadan. He died in early 2000, and was laid to rest in his home town – Uokha – in Owan East Local Government Area of Edo state, Nigeria. His well-known work is the Sudden Storm
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6 comments:

  1. I just remembered a piece of it and typed in stuff like "The Storm" or "The Rains" but then it finally came to me. I remember doing it in Primary school. It couldn't be secondary school as I'm niw in Form Four. It had to be either Standard Three or Standard Four but it very well could be lower but I doubt it being in Forms One or Two. Anyway, just came to say that it's a great poem and as I now just found out that the author passed away, I'm sorry since I remember it all the way back to Primary School. It was just that one line, "Helter-skelter the parents run." Sorry, it was two lines. The next one is,"Where have you been, you naughty boy? But the child can feel nothing but joy." Actually, now as I check back at the poem, it was the second and third paragraphs that remain imprinted in my mind as I also remember that in the Language Arts book there was always pictures to go with the story. I remember this one's illustration being a somewhat scared family sitting on the ground by the window of their house with a whole lot of children peering outside and some clinging on to their poor mother.

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    1. I am glad the poem affected you positively as it has affected so many. I read it many years ago, and because it was nowhere online, I had a problem reading it easily. Finally, I had to look for the main text to put it up here so it can be seen easily. It deserves to be read forever.

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  3. Hi,
    i'm on holiday in a tropical country and there was a storm coming. All the imagery invoked by this poem suddenly came back to me and I started to recite it, but could only get to verse two though I remember the last line.

    I had to find it and posted the first line to happen on your blog. Thank you for re-printing and bringing back memories.

    Like you I learnt this in first year of secondary school (1973) and we had to learn it off by heart, and stand up and recite at the next English Lit lesson. I love poetry and can still recite some the poems we learnt hen e.g. Abou Ben Adhem (may his tribe increase!).

    Once again, thank you!

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    1. Glad to know it brought back good ol' memories, Odiri. 1973 was 20 years before I was born, so I can really appreciate now how this poem affects different generations the same way.

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  4. Who is the persona of the poem A sudden storm

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